First i want to say - this is a completely new episode, which came in as a idea after i re-maked third part of "The LocLoh party". You'll get the chance to see all the old ones, thought

<span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'>Episode 1 - The Search</span>

Early in the next morning, i manage to wake up, having slept for no more then a couple of hours. Everyone else was still sleeping...so i decided to make 'em a little trick - i got up at the DJ's place, set the volume to full max and played the chorus of KoRn's "Wake Up". Instatly most of the people jumped straight away, wondering what the hell is going on. After i bursted in laughter and they realized i did this, some of the lads even wanted to kill me, but they were holded off by the others After everyone cooled off, we all got in the living room for a cup of coffee.
-Hey, anyone seen Lindsay? - Scoutmaster asked
-I think she left with Paris around 4:00 AM - Adam replied
-Hilary? Where is she?!? I'll tear her apart! - the totally-drunk Marius screamed
-Oh, my god, what did you let him drink? - i ask, while Ally, Brittany and Michelle make sinister smiles
-Well...only a few cocktails - Ally couldn't stop herself from laughing
-Great, now how are we gonna get him sober? - Ron intervened
-I'm not drunk...really...*burp*...just tell me where's Hilary... - Marius managed to say
-Forget that, don't you notice someone missing, guys? - i reply
-Who do you think is missing? - Jennina asked
-Tom and Martin. We last sa... - i stopped and looked at Levi
-Oh, no you don't, don't look at me, you laughed your a$$ off when they missed Lindsay's house! - Levi replied
-Do you mind telling us what's this about? - Zenn asked
-No time for that, we gotta search for the guys - i replied
-What we'll do with Marius? - Ron asked
-I guess Jenn can stay here and watch over him, ok? - i glance at Jennina
-Sure, no problem - she replied confidently
-OK, lets go find 'em! - Josh shouted out
Everyone got in their cars and set off wandering around the city. I got to be in one car with Andrew, Adam and Bent.
-Were they drunk? - i ask the others
-Lets just say that the alcohol finished just before they left - Bentis rolled his eyes
-Not good...any ideas where to search 'em? - i replied
-The local police department? - Adam replied uncofidently
-Fo'sho, they could be there - Andrew agreed
We did find them there, the police said Tom and Martin bugged the hell out of Bon Jovi, who had the bad luck of being Lindsay's neighbor
After we called the others and returned to the LocLoh crib...
-What were you doing in Bon Jovi's house, anyway? - Jennina asked the two, while me and Levi burst out in laughter
-It seems we mistaken it with Lindsay's... - Tom replied
-Well, you two are gonna see her today or tomorrow anyways - i say, while smiling
-Are you serious? - Martin asked
-Yeah, she and Paris were here the whole night - Zenn interrupted
Everything is well, when it finishes well. The lads got to meet LL when she came by this afternoon along with Paris. What more could we ask for? We were friends with Lindsay, she lived right next door to us...it was "picture perfect"

This post has been edited by Trent: Nov 16 2008, 02:46 AM

Nice one!

I even managed a cameo!

i instantly became the baby sitter haha! but its cool!
as i said, its almost automatic that we are all friends with lindsay .. imagine, living almost next door and always throwing the coolest parties .. ahaha im pretty sure paris would soon ask lindsay if she can move in so as not to miss our awesome parties!

yup me too

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Well, what can i say, regular newbies are my favorites

allright, im in this one

great story, may there be alot more of them

ha nice story fo'sho bro
keep it up
intresring ish
lol jen..the baby sitter

Well chosen soundtrack for the story

Glad it was Bon jovi we bugged cuz he's kinda annoying

Str8 man keep it up

that was an awesome celeb-cameo story i've read (and possibly the only one)...
*waiting for #2*

done nicely...

Episode 2 - Itsy Bitsy Spider

*The second day*

I didn't think it can get any better then the party we had. But it did...

Around 10:00 AM Lindsay called Jennina.
-Really?...OK, we'll come... - we heard Jenn saying
-What did she say? - mushi asked
-She wanted us to come down to the set of "Lucky"! - Jenn replied and everyone started scream and jump joyfully
We didn't waste time getting there. After our arrival, Lindsay came and said:
-Hey, guys, we had a little trouble with the extras...will you cover them?
-Like hell we do! - Martin shouted out
The director told us what everyone's job is and since it wasn't much we achieved it without any problems. That was only the beginning, thought...
-What was the deal with the extras anyway? - i asked Lindz after we finished filming for the day
-Well, from what i know they got greedy - she replied while making an unhappy expression
-That's too bad... - i added
-Any ideas for the evening? - Josh asked
-Another party with brainwashing ammount of alcohol? - Tom smiled
-Good idea, i'll call Paris, she loved the last one - Lindsay replied
After going back to the LocLoh crib...
-Make sure we got everything on the list for the party - i say while opening the front door
-Yeah, yeah, we got everything - Martin replied confidently
As i open the door i see a big opened box lying on the table. Adam, Realmatic and TweakFreak headed towards it.
-"With love from a friend" - Adam read the note and wondered what was on the inside of the now empty box
-Hey, what's with all the webs? - Jennina shouted from her room
The three take a glance at eachother.
-Do you think it's...? - Adam asked
-Uh-huh - Realmatic replied uncofidently
-It can't be... - John disagreed
An answer was found when Trish runned away from her room while screaming. As we all got upstairs, we saw a spider...it was clear that it's a "black widow" one. Mushi instantly stepped on it.
-So...now what we'll do? - Trish asked
-Get rid of the spiders before LL and Paris get here would be a good idea... - Adam replied
-We don't even know how many they are - i interfered
Meanwhile...
-Hey, Lindsay wants you all at her crib tonight - noalt shouted from the door
-Everything just sorts out, doesn't it? - i smile at the others
-I just feel our little problem today will become a big one tomorrow - Adam shaked his head
-Relax, we'll just call someone to clean them up - Tom agreed with me
We did go in LL's crib where we weren't the only people invited - "Lucky" co-star Samaire Armstrong and the rest of the cast were also here. Bentis didn't leave Samaire the whole evening, taking his time to talk to her Another crazy party was "in the bag" and our friendship with LL was getting stronger with every day...Our little problem at the LocLoh mansion? Didn't matter now...

P.S.: that's another new episode...which expands the number of them to 12. The minimum of eventual episodes, that is

This post has been edited by Trent: Feb 2 2005, 04:23 PM

It doesn't feel right that Bentis is there. He doesn't ever leave his computer, how could he have been at the party?

Good job Vik! Btw when will there be conflicts? I can't wait for them to happen!!

Interesting idea, Zenn. One thing's for sure i'll not create conflicts between LocLoh members cause i'm scared of the opportunity for them to take part in the real world afterwards And mods would be forced to erase my story if it consists a conflict between LocLoh members...but between celebs...i'll consider such idea

whats my deal with hil?

lol
good story man
keep it crunk

the poor spider


great story as allways

How did a black widow get in a house in america
Well, I'll use my imagination

I wanted the box to be a bomb but you cant have everything lol keep writin

Well, a bomb would be a little too far, but on a second thought your comment makes me calm that whatever i write won't be taken negatively...cause before i was literally scared to think...i didn't want my stories to get out of bounds and that killed a lot of ideas

Now i just don't give a ****

This post has been edited by Trent: Jan 12 2005, 08:22 PM