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Don't Worry, I've Got You!, A Michael, Lindsay and Ali story.
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post Jun 14 2008, 07:14 AM
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Plot: Lindsay and Michael, now thirty and thirty-one, come to Ali's rescue during a breakdown. What's going on with Ali? She's questioning herself: Is all this worth it without someone to share it with?
[Time Frame: Christmas 2018]

[Ali's thoughts are in Italics. we're at her Penthouse on Park Avenue on Christmas Morning, and when I say morning, I mean it, it's 4:30!]

I can't handle this anymore, once again, I'm alone during my favorite holiday... sure I've got my family, but what about someone to share all this with?

Looking around, Ali Lohan, now 5'10" and 24, remembered something she'd realized a long time ago.


It's lonely at the top.

She couldn't get back to sleep, no matter how hard she tried, so Ali did what she always did when insomnia set in, she showered, got dressed and headed down the street to the local Deli.

[Point of view change: Christian Andrews, a twenty-something New Yorker (and the owner of the Deli) smiles when he sees Ali approach.]

"Hi Al, are you all right?" Christian asked.

"Chris, it's cold out here!" Ali exclaimed.

"You're always welcome," Christian smiles, "Come on in."

Ali bolted through the door, nearly knocking Christian over, "Wow, it's colder than I thought it was."

"Yeah?" Ali asked, "You're not the one wearing springtime layers in winter, I knew I should've grabbed a coat."

"It's not my fault you couldn't wait to get here," Christian teased.

"Oh! Conceited much? if your head gets any bigger it'll explode," Ali shot back.

"Only around you my dear," Chris replied.

Ali smiled as he set her drink of choice down in front of her, "Thanks."

"Of course," Christian smiled.


Next: The breakdown, and Lindsay and Mike's rescue. (Possible sequel to this is in the works!)
Special Author's note: A new fic for the first fans my writing ever had, I began writing fan fiction right here at LocLoh, and although it's only June, the holidays come fast!




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post Jun 14 2008, 07:34 AM
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post Jun 14 2008, 10:56 AM
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post Jun 14 2008, 02:26 PM
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Chapter 2: Here Comes The Breakdown! (AKA Big Brother and Big Sister to the Rescue. (Her thoughts are in italics)

A Few hours later Ali gazes out her window.

Look at all those people together... this is depressing! sad.gif

Ali sighed, it was more than just being alone for the holiday, it was the empty feeling she didn't know how to get rid of.

That empty feeling that was the cause of the tears that were now cascading down her face.

Through the tears she managed to grab her phone and call the two most important people in her life.

"Ali?" Mike answered, "I've been trying to reach you for the past hour, are you all right?"

"No," Ali choked up, "I feel horrible and I need you both."

Lindsay looked at Michael and he nodded, "Al, are you at home?"

"I haven't left," she sighed.

"We're on our way babe, don't worry, just hang in there," Lindsay said.

[hang in there, I'll be back later to finish this!]


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post Jun 20 2008, 02:31 PM
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Great story.
Btw, in the past, we used to have plenty of stories involving the LocLoh ppl and Lindsay.
It will be great to have such stories again, if someone has the inspiration to continue them.
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post Jun 21 2008, 07:32 PM
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(I have a sequel idea for the LocationLohan London Adventure, look for it soon!)

Chapter 2: Here Comes The Breakdown! (AKA Big Brother and Big Sister to the Rescue. (Her thoughts are in italics)

A Few hours later Ali gazes out her window.

Look at all those people together... this is depressing! sad.gif

Ali sighed, it was more than just being alone for the holiday, it was the empty feeling she didn't know how to get rid of.

That empty feeling that was the cause of the tears that were now cascading down her face.

Through the tears she managed to grab her phone and call the two most important people in her life.

"Ali?" Mike answered, "I've been trying to reach you for the past hour, are you all right?"

"No," Ali choked up, "I feel horrible and I need you both."

Lindsay looked at Michael and he nodded, "Al, are you at home?"

"I haven't left," she sighed.

"We're on our way babe, don't worry, just hang in there," Lindsay said

[Five minutes later: Ali, Mike and Linds are getting to the heart of the matter, in the truest sense!]

"I'm just so lonely, there's no one to share all this with and it really sucks!!" Ali said, sighing into Lindsay's shoulder.

"Are you actually looking for someone?" a slightly puzzled Mike asked.

"I wasn't before, but maybe I should start looking," Ali mused.

"You know, if you open your eyes and heart, he could already be there Al, just keep an open mind about it too," Lindsay smiled.

Ali smiled, "Breakfast is here!"

"Hey you," Christian smiled, "Did I see Mike and Lindsay earlier?"

"Hi Chris!" Lindsay exclaimed with a laugh.

Mike looked up expectantly.

"Don't worry Mike, I've got enough for all of us," Christian smiled.

[They met when Christian escorted Ali to a charity event a few months before]

A few minutes later, Ali's eyes light up, "I just realized something!"

Mike and Lindsay looked at their little sister and nodded, "What is it?"

Ali sent them a rapid text message, "Read that."

They smiled as they read their texts, "We'll see you tonight?"

"If everything goes right," she smiled.

"Thanks for breakfast Chris," Lindsay smiled, "We've got to be heading out to Mom's now."

"All right Lindsay," Chris smiled, "See you later."

Michael and Lindsay headed out and Ali grinned.

"Hey Chris, can you do me a favor, can you get the towel out of the dryer and bring it to me?"

"Sure Al," he smiled, "On my way to get it now."

Ali grinned as she looked up into the doorway of the bathroom, unknown to Christian, there was misletoe!

"This is too easy," she said, sending the text to Lindsay.

"Good luck Al! wink.gif" Lindsay's reply read. Ali placed her cell phone in her caddy and grinned as Christian walked in and looked up and laughed, "Why didn't you just ask?"

"It's more fun this way," she said, pulling him in for a tender kiss.

When they broke for air a few minutes later neither one of them could stop grinning, "I love you," Christian finally said.

Ali smiled, she'd had an epiphany a while ago, "I love you too baby, I really need to shower though, Mom hates it when we're late and you don't want to make a bad impression by being late."

He happily obliged, "You're right, I'll be in the living room all right?"

"Thank you," Ali smiled.

[an hour and twenty minutes later: Chris and Ali are pulling up to Dina's.]

Ali smiled as she bounded up the steps, "Holy smokes, I forget it gets a little bit colder on the Island!"

"I'll be glad to warm you up," Christian grinned.

Dina smiled, "Hey Al, Merry Christmas!"

"Hi Mom," Ali smiled warmly walking into the house with Christian behind her, "I missed you!"

"I missed you too Al," Dina smiled wrapping her daughter in a warm hug.

Christian smiled as he brought his goody bag and flowers in, "Hi, these are for you, I'm Christian."

Dina hugged him, "I know who you are sweetheart."

He smiled as she then whispered, "Thanks for taking care of this one."

"Of course," he nodded.

Dina smiled, "Hey kiddo, can you put these in water?"

Lindsay smiled, "Sure."

Mike grinned, "Hey guys, Cody should be here soon, they're just dropping their bags off at the Marquis."

"How many times do I have to tell them that they could've saved money by staying here!" Dina exclaimed in slight exasperation.

"Mom," Mike laughed, "Seriously you know about Cody's contract, it's not expensive for them to stay there."

"Yeah," Dina pouted, "But I honestly would've preferred that they stay here, I miss you kids when you're gone!"

"Awe," Ali smiled, "Mom misses us Mikey, did you hear that?"

"Hey, shut up!" Dina laughed.

Ali playfully stuck her tongue out at her mother.

"Welcome to Casa De Lohan," Lindsay said shaking her head and grinning.

[More Christmas stuff in Chapter 3, and Cody and his family arrive!]

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Chapter 3: Merry Christmas Everyone!

Lindsay and Michael stood by the window, "So how's life little brother?"

"Life's good," Michael replied warmly, "Except I really wish your sister-in-law was here."

Lindsay smiled, "I know someone who can cheer you up, look!"

Michael smiled, "Do you see that car? That can only be."

"CODY!!" They exclaimed in unison.

Cody smiled as the door flew open, bracing himself for impact.

Breanna laughed as Lindsay and Michael bowled him over, "Yeah babe, really funny!"

"Yeah I know, that's why I'm laughing," Bre grinned.

Cody playfully stuck his tongue out at his wife of three months, "Real nice baby, help me up?"

Bre laughed and smiled as Cody took her hand, "OK."

Michael smiled, "Hey Code."

The brothers embraced, "Hi big brother."

"Merry Christmas," Lindsay smiled.

"Hey you, come here," Cody grinned.

"Aah! Cody!" Lindsay squealed, "Put me down now, gently please?"

Bre and Mike were already waiting inside when Cody walked through the door with Lindsay.

"Reminds me of the honeymoon," Bre laughed.

"Please don't," Mike shuddered, "Let's keep the private stuff private."

Bre giggled, "Too much?"

"That and there are just some things I'd rather not know about," Mike grinned, laughing as Bre smacked him on the arm.

Lindsay smiled as Cody finally put her down, "Merry Christmas Everyone!"

"Hi baby," Dina smiled.

"Hey Ma, Merry Christmas," Cody said, giving his mother a hug and a kiss.

"Hey Mom, have you seen where Ali disappeared to? I noticed an unfamiliar car out there," Bre smiled.

"You know where her room is," Dina smiled.

Bre and Cody smiled and went upstairs, "Al?"


[inside Ali's locked bedroom]

Ali shot up at the sound of her brother's voice, "Code?"

"Yeah!" Cody exclaimed from the other side of the locked door.

Ali smiled, "Make yourself decent."


Christian walked out and smiled, "Hey buddy."

Cody shot Christian a warning look, "I'm watching you pal!"

Christian smiled, "Easy little man, I wouldn't hurt her and you know that."

"Yeah, go get dressed man, dinner's almost ready," Cody said.

Christian shook his head, something was telling him that he was going to be in for a challenging Christmas with his girlfriend's family.



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Chapter 3: A Very Merry Christmas Dinner, A Very Merry Gift Exchange.

"Chris," Cody motioned.

Christian smiled, "I'm sorry if I upset you buddy."

"No man," Cody shook his head, "Just be careful all right? That's all I ask."

"I know," Christian assured him.

Cody looked up into Christian's eyes, "Everything?"

"Yeah, pretty much," Christian said, "The five of you never really had it easy."

"Bad first impression for just meeting you," Cody laughed.

"Let's start over," Christian encouraged.

Cody nodded in agreement, "Hi I'm Cody."

Christian walked into the dining room and shook his hand, "I'm Christian."

"Nice to finally meet you," Cody smiled.

"You too," Christian smiled.

"Oh man Ma," Cody smiled taking a hearty whiff of the heavenly aroma that filled the kitchen, "That smells goooood!"

"In time Code," Dina chuckled, "in due time!"

"I loved the look on his face though," Bre laughed, "It's like the first time we went to Disney World together."

"Oh yeah," Lindsay laughed, "I remember hearing him on the phone, we gotta go here, and here, and oh yeah, here too!"

"Aw hush," Cody smiled, trying not to break out into hysterical laughter.

"We're going back for a week, we can afford it now that he's out of season," Bre smiled.

"What was it like winning the MLS Cup this year Code?" Mike smiled.

"There'