Nancy "Brenda" Pitman = Lindsay's character
real or fake? not sure though





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EXT. BEACH – WEEKS LATER - DAY

Brenda sits looking out at the ocean.

BRENDA NARRATING O.S.
I hadn't taken a drug in nearly a year and so I
was finally able to feel something for all those
people who'd been killed…

INT. PITTMAN DINING ROOM – NIGHT

Brenda sits alone eating dinner across from her little brother in silence..
BRENDA NARRATING O.S.
And when I heard what my friends had done to
the LaBiancas and how they'd posed the bodies
and carved "pig" on Mr. LaBianca's stomach and
left this barbecue fork stuck in his body, I felt kind
of sick… And deep down, I knew their lives were
over...

CUT TO:

INT. BRENDA'S CAR – DAY

Brenda drives through the city listening to the radio.

D.J.
Yes, caller number four… What do you think
about what pundits are calling the, "Trial of
the Century"?

CALLER
I think they should dispense with this trial and
execute them… Anyone can see they're guilty…

Brenda turns off the radio. It's just too depressing.

BRENDA NARRATING O.S.
I don't know what made me drive downtown to
where the trial was being held… I guess I just
needed to be there

EXT. SIDEWALK – DAY

Brenda walks down the sidewalk where a bunch of NEWS VANS covering the Manson Trial are parked.

ANOTHER ANGLE – Squeaky, Sandra Goode and Gypsy sit on the sidewalk looking incredibly cheerful and surrounded by ONLOOKERS.

SQUEAKY
Oh, my God! You're out! You're out!

Squeaky leaps to her feet, then runs up and embraces Brenda for a long moment as Sandra and Gypsy rush up to hug her too.

SQUEAKY cont.
Oh, my God! Where are you living?!
BRENDA
At my parent's place, in Malibu.

SQUEAKY
Well, not anymore, you're not!

BRENDA
No, Squeaky, listen... I have to stay in Malibu…
My bail was contingent on my being in the
custody of my parents… I can't go anywhere…

SQUEAKY
Oh, bull[censored]… I rented a house a half a mile from
here and there's plenty of room... Now come on…
We'll go there now... I need to talk to you…

INT. SQUEAKY'S DOWNTOWN HOUSE – DAY

Brenda sits at the kitchen table snorting lines of crystal with Squeaky.

SQUEAKY
So right after the big bust in the desert, Dede's
parents packed her off to Paris to be a model.

BRENDA
You know they weren't gonna let her stick
around for this circus.

SQUEAKY
Yeah, and I wish her well… I really do… But she
was just a tourist… She was never really part of us...
Jeez, toward the end there, I don't think I saw her
more than once or twice...
(beat)
You know, Clem and Danny got indicted yesterday…

BRENDA
For what?

SQUEAKY
I keep forgetting you've been in jail all this time.
(beat)
The day after you got busted, about a week before
the big move to Death Valley… We all got together
and killed Shorty.

BRENDA
Oh, my God.

SQUEAKY
Hey, you knew it was going to happen sooner or
later.

BRENDA
Yeah, he was a pain in the ass all right.

SQUEAKY
It took a really long time too… First they started
on his feet and then they worked their way up to
his head. Just cutting and cutting... [censored], it was
so intense...

BRENDA
That's enough… I don't want to hear anymore.

SQUEAKY
Then they hoisted him up by his feet and

BRENDA
Sadie!

SADIE
Sorry... Sorry...

BRENDA
How'd they get caught?

SQUEAKY
How do you think?

BRENDA
Sadie, of course.

SQUEAKY
Of course it was Sadie... I'm lucky I'm not in
jail too.

BRENDA
Charlie was crazy to have Sadie do all that stuff.



SQUEAKY
Yeah, well... He's only human...
(beat)
Hey, wait'll you meet the guys.

BRENDA
What guys?

SQUEAKY
Some guys Charlie hooked up with, for protection
from the blacks... Who, as you can imagine, are
pretty pissed off at him.
(beat)
They're calling themselves, "The Aryan
Brotherhood." Anyway, two of 'em staying here…
Wait'll you meet 'em… They're so damn cute…

BRENDA
Listen, Squeaky... I have a curfew now... And I
really need to be getting back... It's a long drive
to Malibu.

Squeaky gets a hard expression.

SQUEAKY
God, Brenda... I don't even know you anymore.

BRENDA
Yeah, well... I don't even know myself anymore.

SQUEAKY
Look, you're Brenda McCann and you're one of
us. And right now, Charlie and three of our sisters
are on trial for their lives not half a mile from
here and you want to go back to Malibu? What
the hell's in Malibu?

BRENDA NARRATING O.S.
Squeaky was right... There wasn't anything in
Malibu to replace what I'd lost... So I risked
everything and broke the terms of my bail and
moved back in with Squeaky... And I didn't care
if I went to jail for a thousand years... I just wanted
to belong again...

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another scene

EXT. TERRY MELCHER'S CIELO DRIVE HOUSE – DAY


A day time get together with about fifteen upscale Rock & Roll CELEBRITIES.

Mingling among the professionals are various Manson Girls, including Brenda, Squeaky and Sadie, really pouring it on and acting as flirty and vivacious as possible.


ANOTHER ANGLE - Dennis is introducing Charlie to various PARTY GOERS, one of whom is an enormous FAT WOMAN.


DENNIS

Hey, Cass... I want you to meet this guy I'm getting

ready to record… This is Charlie Manson... Charlie,

this is Cass Elliot, from the Mamas and the Papas…


MAMA CASS

Hello, Charlie… I've heard a lot about you.


Charlie proceeds to kiss ass with the rock stars to the point of nausea.


CHARLIE

Hey, Mama Cass... I've been digging your records

for a long time now.


DENNIS

And this is Frank Zappa. Frank, this is Charlie

Manson...


CHARLIE
Your music is so groovy. Definitely groovy.


Frank takes an instant dislike to Charlie. Something about his heavy handed charm offensive just rubs him the wrong way.


FRANK

Well, Charlie… We try to be groovy in

everything we do… Grooviness is definitely

one of the qualities we strive for…


Charlie catches the disrespect immediately. He gives Frank a cold look. Frank sees it

and laughs contemptuously. Dennis sees it too and takes Charlie by the arm.


DENNIS

Hey, Charlie… C'mere, there's someone else

I want you to meet…

Charlie looks back coldly at Frank Zappa for a moment as Dennis leads him away to a MAN standing on the other side of the room with a beautiful blonde WOMAN.


DENNIS cont.

Charlie, this is my producer and our host, Terry

Melcher and his girlfriend, Candice Bergen…


Charlie looks Candice Bergen like she's a particularly choice piece of meat.


CHARLIE

I really like your movies, lady.


CANDICE

Why, thank you, Charlie. How nice of you to

say so.


ON BRENDA, SQUEAKY & SADIE – dancing with a funny little guy with a mustache. This is SONNY BONO (32).


BRENDA

So, Sonny... Where's Cher?


SONNY

She's visiting her mom back east.


SADIE

She's really hot.


SONNY

Yes, she's definitely that.


SADIE

Is she into girls?


SONNY

You'd really have to ask her that yourself...

(beat)

So, who's your friend?


Sonny gestures toward Charlie who's talking with Terry Melcher and Candice Bergen.


SQUEAKY

Oh, that's Charlie... The most amazing man in

the world. And the next Bob Dylan... No, he's

better than Bob Dylan.


SONNY

Really... He's like your guru or something?


BRENDA

Something like that.


SADIE

Hey, Sonny...


Sadie leans in close to Sonny and puts her hand on his leg.


SADIE cont.

Wanna go inside?


BRENDA

Come on, you'll have fun.


Sonny smiles – he's going for it.


ON CHARLIE – talking with Terry and Candice, while Sonny can be seen being pulled into the house by Brenda, Sadie and Squeaky.


TERRY

So, Charlie... Dennis tells me you're into some

really happening sounds.


Candice sees Sonny go into the house with the girls and elbows Terry to get his attention.


CHARLIE

Well, I'm just doing what comes honestly..


TERRY

I like that. I do…


DENNIS

I was hoping you'd drop by and listen to what

Charlie's doing when he gets a little more material

together.


TERRY

Say, don't you have a tour coming up?


DENNIS

Yeah, but I'm letting Charlie use the studio…

Charlie'll call and tell you when he's ready to

show you something, won't you, Charlie?

CHARLIE

Definitely, man… Definitely…


ON CHARLIE – having big dreams of stardom.


BRENDA NARRATING O.S.

Terry was this big time music producer whose

mom was that actress Doris Day… He was also

the guy who'd discovered Paul Revere and the

Raiders and he was also the producer for the

Byrds... And now he was going to be working

with Charlie...


INT. TERRY & CANDICE'S BEDROOM – SAME MOMENT


Sonny Bono, sweating profusely and completely ripped, is holding Sadie up against the wall like Sonny Corleone in The Godfather, [censored]ing her like some kind of animal, while Brenda and Squeaky in various

stages of undress lay on the bed watching with stunned expressions..


BRENDA

Who would have thought Sonny Bono was such

a stud?


SQUEAKY

It's always the quiet ones.


ON SADIE – being driven to new highs by Sonny Bono.

Some regulars have pointed out that I omitted the link to MONKEY BOY'S BLOG.

Sorry.

Go ahead and read the crazy [censored] the Monkey flings.



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This really is an excerpt from the Screenplay MANSON GIRLS by Matthew Bright.
It feels like it was written in crayon.

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EXT. BEACH – SHORT TIME LATER


ON CHARLIE – watching Nancy and Sue as they step onto the shore with their boards.


ON NANCY - carrying her surfboard onto the shore and letting it drop to the sand before picking up her towel and drying off.


CHARLIE

Hey, girlie... What's your name?


Nancy ignores Charlie, slipping on a beach dress as Dede comes up behind him.


DEDE

That's Nancy, Charlie... Remember, that girl I was

telling you about? And you're gonna dig her so much.


CHARLIE

I already dig her…

(to Nancy)

Hey, you want to hang out with us today?


Nancy seems reluctant, while Dede stands behind Charlie silently pantomiming like she's taking a hit of pot – trying to encourage her to come along because this guy has weed.


NANCY

I probably shouldn't.


SQUEAKY FROMME (19), steps from the Bus and crosses the sand to Charlie.


SQUEAKY

So, we finally meet the famous, Nancy Pitman...

But she looks more like a, "Brenda," to me...

Don't you think, Charlie?


CHARLIE

Yeah, she does look like a "Brenda."


Henceforth, Nancy will now be referred to as "BRENDA"

ANOTHER ANGLE - Sue appears, carrying her surfboard over her head.


SUE

Hey, Charlie… Hey, Squeaky…


Sue leans her board against the seawall in front of her house, as Charlie takes Brenda's hand and leads her toward the bus parked at the curb.


INT. THE BLACK BUS – MOMENTS LATER


Brenda, Sue and Dede climb aboard with Squeaky and Charlie following behind.


POV – FIVE GIRLS and several BIG DOGS sit on a carpet inside the bus.


BACK TO SCENE


CHARLIE

Listen up, ladies… This is Brenda… Brenda,

this is Ouish…


OUISH (16), (pronounced "Wheesh") smiles warmly..


CHARLIE cont.

And that there's Snake… And that one there

with the baby's Sadie…


SUSAN ATKINS aka "SADIE", holding the BABY'S arm up and making him wave.


CHARLIE O.S. cont.

And Squeaky, who you met… She's sort'a like

everyone's mom... And Yeller...


SQUEAKY

Welcome to our magic bus, Brenda.


CHARLIE

She don't know it yet, but my little crystal ball

tells me, she's gonna be gettin' real close.


BRENDA

Oh, I am, am I?


CHARLIE

You was lost, Brenda… But now you're found…

You just didn't know it 'cuz you been asleep

your whole life...

Charlie gets behind the wheel as Brenda sits among the Girls, where Squeaky places a string of homemade love beads around her neck and strokes her hair affectionately.


EXT. HIGHWAY – SAME MOMENT





found on this web http://tatelabianca.blogspot.com/

i think it's probably fake...
look at the grammar in the end where it says:
"You was lost, Brenda… But now you're found"
i dont think a script is supposed to have flaws and i dont think a script is easy to leak either :S

Being someone who has read quite a large number of scripts; you'd be surprised by the number of grammar and spelling mistakes in them. You can't really tell whether it's real or not; quite easy to write a couple of fake script pages.

even though I think its fake,
it sounds kinda good anyways.

I think it's a fake... why would the script be on the internet?