one poem by me, i find it very sad |
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one poem by me, i find it very sad |
  Jun 26 2007, 08:59 PM
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Posts: 271 Joined: 14-August 06 From: Bulgaria Name: Elly 
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you may don't like it but i made it today at my classes at english... Someday when you wake up you may find you're livin' a lie and then will turn to cry by the life you left behind beyond the border line this is a confession of a broken heart cuz when i turn around it's all black may they'll never realize how they make you feel and will think you're being ill but they don't really know who you are because they've never seen what they are left behind and when you gonna cry,they'll just wondering why? i'm sorry if don't like it but this is one of my stories about my life.... This post has been edited by Stargirl: Jun 26 2007, 09:06 PM |
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Jun 26 2007, 09:32 PM
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Posts: 1,143 Joined: 28-June 06 From: Casablanca Name: Nouha
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it's really beautiful...it touched my heart 
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Jun 28 2007, 06:10 PM
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 after reviewing the instant replay,U still suck!
Posts: 1,056 Joined: 31-January 06 From: Portland,Oregon Name: GlOriA
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ewwww... thts ur life?? Cheer Up Emo Kid.  n when u reli gonna cry, i'm goin' to wonder why. (coz ur poem is great!!  )
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Jun 28 2007, 07:12 PM
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Posts: 796 Joined: 30-March 06 From: Beirut, Lebanon Name: Dana
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oww... i like it indeed! keep on going but seems u had passed a sad time..or sumthin :S:S anyway gd one! |
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Jun 29 2007, 09:14 AM
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A Super-Devoted LL Fan
Posts: 271 Joined: 14-August 06 From: Bulgaria Name: Elly
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nope!i'm not pass the sad times just one part of me I passed in the old times.I'm still in fight with the world but i'm winning :dddd 
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Jul 9 2007, 04:42 PM
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 One of the Best LL Fans 
Posts: 4,180 Joined: 2-January 06 From: GERMANY Name: CARINA
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cmon people write some poems...isnt that difficult...i have been very busy lately and not having the time...but poetry is something beautiful so dont let it go away here
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Jul 10 2007, 04:18 PM
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after reviewing the instant replay,U still suck!
Posts: 1,056 Joined: 31-January 06 From: Portland,Oregon Name: GlOriA
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ewww... i've been hella busy these dayzz, soo not to mention writing up a poem...   p.s. also, i dun like writing up poem.  maybe lyrics will do! 
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Jul 20 2007, 08:38 PM
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One of the Best LL Fans
Posts: 4,180 Joined: 2-January 06 From: GERMANY Name: CARINA
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everything goes by so fast can not hide from what was last can only survive it and move on and if its done then you are gone but please dont disappear from here it only takes time to go away, my dear |
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Jul 20 2007, 09:09 PM
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Posts: 25 Joined: 1-May 07 From: Bel Air Name: Laura
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Not bad
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Jul 21 2007, 08:17 AM
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A Super-Devoted LL Fan
Posts: 271 Joined: 14-August 06 From: Bulgaria Name: Elly
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Thank you for the comments!
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