sometimes i feel like the whole world is crashing against me
why are there certain things that hold me to be free
i dont understand that at all
its a feeling as if you are hitting the wall
deep inside me is a little cut and the big pain
forcing through every bloody single vein
the one thing that keeps me alive
is the strong love that you get - yeah give me high five
family always wants the best for me and giving good advice
and for every mistake i make i have to pay the price
its hard to grow up in life and stand on your own feet
but sometimes its nice to know that there is one person across the street
always getting support and much love from him
in my heart is love covered by dark sin
i feel save and secure in his arms
and im hoping i dont give him harms
im much more emotional than i show
but im more keeping it cool and low
maybe thats the reason why i feel so ripped
but thats not the only thing that is stripped
there is more on my mind as it is written here
keep strong coz i will disappear

Even if its raining outside
There will always be a bright light
Shining in the evening sun
Looking like a secret gun
Want to shoot me really bad
But thats not the only thing which is making me sad
The darkness is overshadowing me
And the blood is dropping from the tree

ur full of feelings!
i like it!

amazing!keep working with your poetry!

THANKS

omg! love it! especially the second part ;]