Meh, I got really bored, so I thought that I should remind you noobs, that the Submissions & Contributions forum is not just an archive and you should start putting in your works Here's what I managed to do in a short deal of time...

Lindsay...In my dreams
It was all like a scene
A single look gave me strenght
cause of you now I'm Trent
And your smile made me melt
was this love that I felt?

All I ever hoped for
All I ever wished for
Was this moment to be real
So I can tell you what I feel
And it's not the best of poems this
But...could I ask for a kiss?

Comments are appreciated

Wow, that's really good! Keep up the great work!!!

not bad viktor...i made one too...right now

There was a chance for me

That I used but I failed

I cannot understand why

But it must be right

I guess I was to curious

And that made the person furious

If I remember back at the time

That was like an unknown crime

It was secretly but open and honest

Everyone could say what they wanted

For me this amazing time is over now

I just can describe the time with a big WOW

I had fun and learned very much

And that was my last poem touch

u guyz make me feel like composing a poem is as easy as abc.
To freelancer, ur poem is a well-written piece, n i can see tht u r trying to put a "this" to fit in the rhyme of "kiss" (it looks a bit funny here) it's great!

To carina, ur poem is good 2... it's really hard to write up a poem randomly without taking soo long to do it.

Thanks for the replies I'll be doing some more in the future, along with the fanfic writings which I dumped a while ago...most of you probably don't know about them, cause you're too fresh in this forum, but they were about Lindsay and the LocLoh (regulars) gang...

Carina, this is very well written and this is something that I hoped people would start doing. Keep it up!

Good work Viktor! Keep it up buddy!

thx vik and gloria!



who is the hottest living person on earth?
if you cant tell me its getting worse
i dont know. do you know it?
please tell me and not just a lil bit
i heard this person has red hair
and her behaviour is always fair
but she likes to dye her hair in different colors
and is totally into this kabballahs
is it true that she likes to scream?
or does she like to eat ice cream?
does she like to hit paparazzi with her car?
or is it just another rumor?
you can read about her very much
last time i read that she did touch
a thing of someone in the public spot
but i dont think that meant a lot
dont you still know who i mean?
they say her acting is pretty good
and she likes to cook some food
she should be very talented and tough
is that still not enough?
did you maybe hear her sing?
her voice can make boys d*i*c*k ring
i love her voice its pretty hot
that is why she is in my spot
okay if you still dont know who i mean
than you better check your dream
coz this chick is the best i have ever seen
with her eyes wild, fascinating and green

This post has been edited by ~ Miss Murder ~: Mar 14 2007, 01:43 PM

cooool!!

Both of those poems are great! Wish I were as talented.

Standing in the rain
Nearly washed the day away
Then I think of you
I know the sight of your smiling face
Your smiling face
And it’s always here with me
Smiling face
Well I wonder could it be

I still know
That I’m never gonna find you
But I do believe
That you’re standing right behind
Will I ever get
The answer to my question
Life will go on

Lying on my bed
Staring at the ceiling
Then close my eyes again
The only thing that’s clear to me
Is your smiling face
Maybe I should wake again
Smiling face
Maybe I should let it end

not bad best
here is another just made it right now
the last line is a bit harsh but there had to be a rhyme lol



Im lying on the ground
no one's coming around
Im asking myself why
But that just makes me cry
I wish I would have done better
to write no mail but a letter
I know its way too late to say Im sorry
but I still do worry
about you even if you think i dont
i can tell you that i wont
leave you ever in my life
but maybe i will kill you with my pretty knife

Is it right to deify an actress?

usually i ignore posts like yours but somehow u r really pissing me off.
what the hell do u want on this site? if u wanna fight then visit paris hilton in jail.
oh and by the way its lindsAy not lindsEy

This post has been edited by ~ Miss Murder ~: May 14 2007, 04:31 PM

I wanna see u,I wanna feel u,I wanna dream u.
There sth wrong,I dont feel strong.
I feel u're gone,I think I'm done
Come here fullfill me,stay with me tonight,u need me.
Lindsay I swear I'm here,dont be afraid its a deal.




I know its not really good,but I wrote it and think about it in about 3 min or sth,and its ma 1st try

I love all your poems, great job.

I'm gonna make up one, aha.

There once was a girl
Who flew around the world
With her talent, and her cash
She's flying first class
Cause she's cool like that
We all love her
Cause of her moves and her songs
We just love to listen her speak
All day long
Go Lindsay
.. We salute you?

Aha.

This post has been edited by freakywildchild: May 17 2007, 01:29 AM

really cool job Dominika,well done

Aha, thanks.. it's like the best two minute poem ever. XDD

yeah u too should practise some more haha